Week 2 Story: The Selfish, Brazen Rabbit
This story is also on my portfolio if you would like to read it there: The Selfish, Brazen Rabbit
Once upon
a time, there was a young man named Rabbit. He was the most handsome guy in all
the land and knew it as well. He was the favorite of all the others students in
town, and even his teachers favored him. He was also smart and a very talented
in seemingly every sport. Everyone seemed to envy him and try to follow after
him. If he bought a certain style of clothing, soon the entire school would
have it. This constant fanfare began to go to his head though. As he got older,
his ability to do no wrong made him mean in his soul. He began to toy with the
younger students because he could. No matter what he did, he breezed through
it. If he skipped an assignment, the teachers gave him an extension. If he was
accused of bullying, he claimed to be misunderstood. Somehow life seemed to be
perfect for Rabbit. By the time he was a senior, he was the most popular
student with anything anyone could ever ask for.
The same
cannot be said for a girl named Lion who was a year younger than Rabbit. She
was quiet and faded into the shadows easily. She did not have many friends. She
had lived a hard life, and growing up this way enabled her to see through Rabbit’s
façade. She was all too aware that him tripping another student wasn’t an
accident and his good grades came from cheating off of the other students. It
all seemed so unfair to her that he got away with everything and had such a
great life that he took for granted.
One day, Rabbit
got too cocky though and decided to steal Jaguar’s car. It was cooler than the
one he had and he thought he deserved it more than Jaguar. He was only going to
go buy a snack at the gas station but when bringing it back he hit another car
in the parking lot. He knew that even he could not get out of this, so he
decided to just leave it. Jaguar was called when it was found and he was in
serious trouble. The principal thought Jaguar not only wrecked his car but was
lying about it as well. Jaguar was obviously confused but Rabbit claimed that
he saw Jaguar leave the wrecked vehicle. Rabbit was such a great student and so
well liked that Principal Deer immediately believed him over Jaguar.
Jaguar
was expelled and the whole school was talking about it. Soon the rumor mill had
fabricated a story that said Jaguar not only ran someone over, but then left
them for dead. The whole school had turned on Jaguar for doing such a terrible
thing. He lost all his friends, his parents were furious, and he had been
expelled.
When Lion
heard this story, she knew it could not be true. Jaguar had always been nice to
Lion and she just knew he wasn’t capable of something like this. To get to the
bottom of the story she went to her friend Elephant to figure out what was
going on, but Elephant had just heard the story from Fox, but Fox had just
heard it from someone else, and so on and so forth. Finally Lion realized that
she just needed to talk to Principal Deer because it was unfair that Jaguar was
going through all this, but before she could talk to her, she ran into Rabbit.
Rabbit was hanging out with his friends in the hallway bragging about how he
saw Jaguar do the whole thing. Now knowing that Rabbit was involved, Lion was
all the more convinced of Jaguar’s innocence. Lion went to Principal Deer to
plead for Jaguar’s innocence, but Principal Deer said without evidence, there
was nothing she could do. Then Lion remembered that the gas station across the
street had a security camera. Principal Deer and Lion got the tape and saw
Rabbit stealing Jaguar’s car.
Now that
Rabbit had been caught red handed, everyone else saw through all the terrible
things he had done. Slowly all the rumors and drama he had caused unrolled.
Jaguar was brought back to school and Rabbit paid for his car to be fixed. Lion
having investigated and uncovered the whole ordeal found herself at the center
of attention and was now the most popular girl in school. Although it seemed
from the outside that Lion was receiving all the same treatment that lead to
Rabbit turning bad, she had a good heart and used her newfound popularity and
power to bring people together and to show everyone that in the end it is
important to not follow blindly.
Author's Note: This is an adaptation of a story in which a Rabbit starts a stampede because it is scared that the world is crumbling. Its hysteria sparks other animals to run along with it in fear until the Lion stops them to ask why they are running. After going down the line to find the Rabbit started it, the Lion takes the Rabbit to where it thought it heard the world start to fall apart and learns that the sound was just a coconut falling. I changed this story to be set in a high school and instead of the Rabbit being a timid animal, it is a egotistical boy who starts a rumor instead of a stampede. I did not like that in the original story the Rabbit was a good guy who just made a mistake and the Lion called him foolish for it. So I changed some personalities and settings, but kept the theme that following a situation blindly is usually a bad thing.
Bibliography: "The Foolish, Timid Rabbit" from the Jataka Tales by Ellen C. Babbitt. Original Story
Image Information: School Hallway, Wikimedia Commons, Source
Wow, I loved your twist on this story! I think it's really cool how you made Rabbit into a character who is full of himself and uses his popularity to manipulate others into believing him without stopping to think on their own. In the original, Rabbit just makes a silly mistake, but this shows him as conniving and using his following for evil, while Lion uses that same following for good and to help others. This is a really neat addition to the classic stories of being wise about following others blindly.
ReplyDeleteThis was a great twist! At first I thought maybe I hadn't read this story, but as I continued I realized that I had. I never thought that Rabbit would be created as an arrogant character because he's made out as such a timid, shy character in the original story. I also retold this story so seeing a completely different idea was great!
ReplyDeleteHi! I loved your take on the original story. Your version of the rabbit is super cocky and full of himself. It was a cool character change from the original story and I liked your interpretation of The Foolish, Timid Rabbit a lot. I liked the setting change too, it made the story fresh!
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