Week 15 Story: Cinderella and the Forest Fire
Once upon a time, in
a land far, far away lived a family of eight. There was a dad, mom, and six
children. The youngest of these six was named Cinderella. Although the family
seemed like a normal family, they were actually a blended family.
Cinderella’s father had married her new stepmother in hopes
of providing a family for her. Her mother had died in childbirth so her father
raised her for the first several years of her life, but then he met her stepmother
and they were soon married. Her father was a hard working man and so he was
gone a lot. Her stepmother obviously disliked her and Cinderella grew skinny
from the mistreatment. Her father did not really noticed because the house with
six children in it was always chaos and she was often forgotten due to her
quiet nature. She knew her father loved her though and so she never complained.
Her life slowly got sadder and sadder while she lived in
this new house with a new family, who did not seem to care for her much. One
day, while her father was away on a business trip, a forest fire came for their
village. Cinderella’s stepmother loaded all of her children onto their horses
and carriages and rode away. Cinderella was worried about what was going to
happen as she watched the fire climb the hill towards their house. She started
to cry, for the first time she began to feel sorry for herself and so she sat
crying in dismay.
Suddenly, a woman appeared.
“Cinderella,” the woman said, “why are you crying?”
Cinderella sat up startled and confused.
“Who are you?”
“Well, I am your fairy godmother, of course,” explained the
woman.
“My fairy godmother? Are you here to take me away?” asked
Cinderella.
“You do not need me to take you away,” said Fairy Godmother.
“You just need to use your strength from within.” With that statement her fairy
godmother disappeared
Cinderella looked around and realized that her fairy
godmother was right. She was a smart girl and she could handle this situation.
She rounded up her animal friends and together they began to work. They loaded
bucket of water, which the birds flew over the fire and dropped. Cinderella and
the dogs dug a trench to create a moat and so on and so forth. They worked
tirelessly throughout the day until finally the fire was put out.
Cinderella’s father arrived that night after hearing about
the fire to check on everyone and found Cinderella alone. Her stepsibling and
stepmother did not return until the next day, having thought they would find
the house burnt down with Cinderella in it. Instead they found everything
perfectly fine. Cinderella’s father was furious that the stepmother had left
Cinderella alone and sent her and her terrible children away. He realized that
all the family he and Cinderella needed were each other.
And they lived happily ever after.
Author’s Note:
This is a retelling of an Indian Jakata tale in which a
small bird is left for a forest fire while his siblings and parents fly away. I
changed it to intertwine the story of Cinderella.
Image Information: Cinderella, Wikipedia Commons, source
Bibliography: Twenty Jakata Tales, 1939, Noor Inayat (Khan), source
Hello Kennedie. I though this was a really creative retelling. I liked how retold the story of Cinderella with the details and ending of the Jakata Tale. You did a good job at transitioning a story about a bird and making it work with people. I also like the picture of your stories Cinderella. My only potential improvement was that I though the story was a little front heavy with the details.
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